Notable Quotes from Essays


We received thoughtful and memorable essays from around the nation. Following are comments from some of the many strong essays that did not win but had important things to say. Those quoted are:
  • Tommy Lambertq, a college student in Richardson, Texas
  • Jennifer Lang, a college student from The Colony, TX
  • Francisco J. Garcia, a college student from South Elgin, IL
  • Ryan Prince, from Orchard Park, NY
  • Courtney Beuerlein, a high school student in Waco, Texas
  • Jennifer L. Langford, a high school student in Tullahoma, Tennessee
  • Jennifer Thayer, college student in Harrod, Ohio
  • Cody J. Terro, a college student from Camarillo, TX
  • Darnina N. Hodge, a college student from Las Vegas, NV
  • Amol Jain, a high school student in Houston, Texas
  • Vanessa Long, from Putney, Vermont
  • William R. Irwin, from Klamath Falls, OR
  • Kevin Oberheim, a high school student in Bear, Delaware
  • Tara Jenkins, a college student from Oregon City, OR
  • Mark Turner, from Cedar Rapids, Iowa
  • Adam Jones, a high school student from Northville, MI
  • Tara J. Hill, high school student in Fourche, South Dakota
  • Amanda McAdoo, a high school student from Detroit, MI
  • Aura Kenney, a college student from Honolulu, Hawaii
  • Timothy J. Pearson, a high school student in Middleport, NY
  • Sarah Allen, a college student from Garner, NC
  • Lesley Moak, a high school student from Estes Park, CO
  • Ola J. Friday, a college student in Brooklyn, NY
  • Dan-Victor Giuriutiu, a high school student in Columbia, SC
  • Jessica L. Yuen from San Jose, CA
  • Stephanie Simmons, a college student from Kensington, NH
  • Cara Sysun, a college graduate from Narragansett, RI
  • Anonymous by request, a college student from Honolulu, Hawaii
  • Melissa M. Flicek, a college student from Wabasha, Minnesota
  • Amanda L. Sheran, a college student from Blandford, MA
  • Julia Hoffman, a college student from Dunedin, FL
  • Crystal A. Stewart, a high school student from Oroville, CA
  • Brian Varisco, a college student from Peachtree City, GA
  • Amanda L. Aguirre, from Yuma, Arizona
  • Sara Wood, a college student from Glendale, AZ
  • Kristin M. Benedetti, a college student in Bakersfield, CA
  • Gabriel Scheck, a college student in Providence, RI
  • Caria A. Long, a high school student in Bakersfield, CA
  • Meaghan Askea, a college student from Leesburg, GA
  • Rick D. Lorenzen, a high school student from Moorpark, CA
  • Jared Barber, a college student from Billings, MT
  • Brian G. Holland, a college student from Lilburn, GA

"Our generation, being burned by broken promises and dysfunctional families, cries out for real leadership and family and community values and wants to be treated as individuals, not products to be used up and discarded. Today's young people, or the X generation, are media-driven and have an insatiable appetite for information, which has not been met by the political system. Since X'ers are interested in direct forms of democracy, different rules and new methods are needed to obtain their support."
- Tommy Lambertq, a college student in Richardson, Texas

"Our political heroes are shallow images of their forefathers who either can't spell integrity and honor, or don't practice them. You challenge us to become more politically involved, to propose changes in the electoral process that will persuade us to flex our political clout. I challenge you to give us intelligent reasons why we would want to. At one time, politics was a time-honored and revered profession that allowed honest, hard-working and respected individuals the opportunity to represent their communities, states and ultimately their country."
- Jennifer Lang, a college student from The Colony, TX

"Young people need to feel like they are a part of something, that they can make a change. They need to become involved with their community first. A person cannot help others if they cannot help themselves. There should be some sort of community participation by an individual when they are young. If they don't start young then they won't pick up until they are more aware of the problems at hand. It's just like a sport, the younger you learn the better you will be when you grow up."
- Francisco J. Garcia, a college student from South Elgin, IL

"Not only is education related to participation, the more educated a particular voter is, it can be assumed, the more informed the individual's vote will be. Participation and quality of education is a function of available resources. Resource allocation for education is provided mainly by the local school district by way of individual property assessments and the subsequent property tax base. To date, education finance reform has occurred in only seventeen states, yet the implementation of such judicial reform has stalled in the legislative branches of many of these state capitals. Thus, it is in my opinion that the first step towards improving voter participation is to reform a rather inequitable and often inadequate education financing arrangement."
- Ryan Prince, from Orchard Park, NY

"Welcome to Dowersville, Texas. Yesterday was Election Day in Dowersville and our federal representative to Congress was elected by one vote. Today, Adam Dowager, the new representative, called a press conference to discuss his plans and goals as our representative. Mr. Dowager announced that he would push to cut financial aid to college students by seventy-five percent which would cut down on the number of students in college allowing those that could afford it the best possible education. Now, Dowersville is home to Dowersville State College, which would lose almost half of its enrollment under Mr. Dowager's plan. How did this happen? Well, Dowersville has almost one hundred thousand people between the ages of eighteen and twenty-five, yet, only ten thousand were registered to vote and of those registered only 337 voted."
- Courtney Beuerlein, a high school student in Waco, Texas

"Participation in politics is also a matter of convenience. Election Day as a holiday would bring more people to the polls. Also, if the opportunity to register at the polls was available, I think that would encourage more participation."
- Jennifer L. Langford, a high school student in Tullahoma, Tennessee

"Young people are participating less and less in the politics of our country. The big question in political circles is: Why? As a young person who rarely votes, I think I understand a few of the reasons. First, however, I shall start with what are NOT the reasons. Some people believe in the myth of inconvenience. These people are attempting to reform voting in such ways as turning the Election Day into a holiday, allowing Internet voting, and creating greater accessibility to candidates of independent and third parties. It is true; these reforms would make voting more convenient. However, inconvenience is a problem for all age groups alike: it does not explain low voter turnout in the youngest age group. Others believe that lowering the voting age would encourage more young people to vote. I believe this is a quick-fix to a perennial problem. I predict that the voter turnout would increase slightly and then return to its downward trend. Why? This is attempting to fix the effects and not the cause of the problem. Younger voters might vote for the novelty of the experience, then begin to slack off for the same reason the current young voters are not voting. The cause is this: lack of knowledge."
- Jennifer Thayer, college student in Harrod, Ohio

"The first change that should be made to the electoral system is to proclaim Election Day a national holiday. This would encourage young people to vote in elections by providing a day off from their busy schedules and allowing them to participate in our democracy's most important political process. This would also remind the youthful electorate and all other willing electoral participants to vote. This change would create an enormous increase in the level of participation by young people as well as all other voters. A workable solution would be to move Election Day to the second Tuesday of November and combine it with Veterans' Day, traditionally celebrated on November 11. This would send a powerful signal to the citizens of our country about the importance of voting. And what better way to honor those who fought for our freedom and democratic rights than for Americans to exercise their suffrage rights on what could become known as 'Veterans' Democracy Day'?"
- Cody J. Terro, a college student from Camarillo, TX

"Unfortunately, the voting rights of African-American men have become yet another casualty in the nation's long and misguided war on drugs. Studies have shown that out of 10.4 million eligible black males 1.4 have been disenfranchised due to felony convictions. Laws mandating the revocation of voting rights were established the same time that literacy tests and poll taxes were being used to prevent blacks from voting. ACLU Legislative Counsel Mark Kappelhoff pointed out that 'laws that target voting, one of the most fundamental features of our participatory democracy undercut everything for which this country stands.' Its time Congress mandates this law to allow the punishment to fit the crime. The implications of this law are totally unfair to those people who turn their lives around for the better."
- Darnina N. Hodge, a college student from Las Vegas, NV

"In December of 1999, millions of individuals came to Seattle, Washington to protest the globalization of the economy and protest the ideas presented by the World Trade Organization. Whether their protest was justified or not, the reason why this protest was so significant was that millions arrived in Seattle because the ideas quickly spread over the Internet. It was convenient for millions to get the information by just clicking a mouse instead of going to the library or using the phone. But the convenience of the Internet can be used to the advantage of the Federal Government in spreading the word of mouth about voting."
- Amol Jain, a high school student in Houston, Texas

"Our current electoral process is outdated, not responsive to current day needs, and should be replaced with a multiparty system. Because the X generation sees both Republicans and Democrats as devoid of leadership that actually stands and delivers on promises, they are more likely to respond to independent political candidates. This tendency was clearly shown in the 1998 election of Governor Jesse Ventura, a political dark horse seen as challenging the status quo, who actively informed and sought the participation of young people."
- Vanessa Long, from Putney, Vermont

"At what point does democratic America fail? When does she loose her ability to govern? Only when her subjects loose faith in her principles. Only when her subjects no longer feel the need to participate in her existence. Abraham Lincoln once said of America's fate that 'If destruction be our lot we must be its authors and finishers.' He was referring to the Civil War not voter participation, but his sentiments echo through the corridors of time. If we as young Americans refuse to stand and take our responsibility as Americans and if those in power do not do something to change the structure of our voting system we are surely domed. How can our nation survive as we know it with only a small percentage of the population voting. When the responsibility is kept in the hands of the few, the hands of the many will soon think those of the voting minority to be tyrants -- and their policies tyranny."
- William R. Irwin, from Klamath Falls, OR

"Another option is to legislate that every presidential candidate is required to campaign at a designated number of college campuses around the country. Each candidate would visit randomly chosen universities from every region of the nation. College campaigning would ensure that young people receive enough attention and their issues are addressed."
- Kevin Oberheim, a high school student in Bear, Delaware

"The way to solve the problem of voter apathy and poor political participation among young voters is all in the timing. Bestowing the vote upon citizens on their eighteenth birthday is not working. If the voting age were lowered to age sixteen, we could use the school system to first, combat the problem of uninformed voters, second, provide the basic motivation necessary to compel people to vote, and finally, be able to produce generations of voters who are more socially responsible and civically active."
- Tara Jenkins, a college student from Oregon City, OR

"Newton's Law of Gravity explicitly says it all, 'Once an object is in motion, it will stay in motion until acted on by an outside force.' I say that we take a little piece of this advice and swing it our way, and let the downfall in voting relinquish itself, and it will do that by 'an outside force.' This force, or reform, can consist of many things. The achievement of all of them, is to find an optimal voting percentage from the youth."
- Mark Turner, from Cedar Rapids, Iowa

"So there my friends and I stood, listening to John McCain tell us about his vision for America, asking our opinions and giving us his, telling us that we need to get involved. After all, he reminded us, 'It's your future.' From that moment on, realizing that the guy really cared about youth, and agreeing with him on reforming campaigns, I knew whom I had to support in 2000. Later that day I took a job chairing the national teen effort for McCain's campaign. It's that easy, really. Just find a candidate with whom you can see eye?to?eye, support him, and vote for him. That is what our generation needs to realize in order to become involved in our political system: that one person, one voice, can make all the difference in the world.
- Adam Jones, a high school student from Northville, MI

"How can the government let the young voters know that their vote will amount to something? By proportional representation - a fundamental structured reform that would make American elections more fair, provide voters with more meaningful choices, and produce legislatures that are more truly representative of the public. In contrast, the plurality system that the United States currently has is designed to insure representation only for the majority of the voters. Only those who vote for the winning candidate get any representation in this system. Everyone else is considered losers who do not merit representation. Their vote is worthless because it cannot serve to elect anyone to represent them. Under the plurality rules you have the right to vote, but not the right to be represented. Maybe that is why many young voters do not vote. We feel as though our candidate has no chance of winning, so why vote? If the government were to choose a better alternative such as proportional representation many young voters would go to the polls on Election Day. Proportional representation is designed to insure that all voters are able to elect their own representatives, and to guarantee that all city, state, and federal legislatures accurately reflect the variety and strength of the political perspectives."
- Tara J. Hill, high school student in Fourche, South Dakota

"Lowering the voting age to at least 16 presents itself as an advantage because almost all of the issues which are being voted on have an effect on young people. For example, in the city where I live, there was a vote on whether or not to establish three new casinos in the downtown area. When three new casinos are built for people to attend and try their luck, one can almost guarantee that some of the people who attend have children. If someone gambles away just a bit more than they need to, that means that money that may have been needed for groceries or rent and other necessities ends up in casino owners' pockets. Therefore, the children will suffer. Who says only people 18 and older are affected by these issues?"
- Amanda McAdoo, a high school student from Detroit, MI

"I firmly believe that the fact that so many young people don't vote is a symptom of a lethargic society. Yes, Americans are lazy in some respects. We don't feel like a nation at one anymore. We are all so into ourselves, everyone is glued to their computer, television, and video games because they make us feel safe. So many people are living life in the fast lane and aren't seeing the reality of the state of our nation or of the world."
- Aura Kenney, a college student from Honolulu, Hawaii

"I can remember how surprised my U.S. History class was when we were taught about the Electoral College. We could hardly believe that many of the things that we believed to be undemocratic were used in our own presidential voting system. Learning about the Electoral College can be enough for most people to loose faith in presidential elections in this country. The drop in the number of young voters can be attributed to our lack of faith in the system that we are being asked to partake in."
- Timothy J. Pearson, a high school student in Middleport, NY

"Having witnessed the September 1998 German Bundestag Elections, I then watched from abroad the U.S. Congressional elections in November. What a shock. While voter turnout in Germany for the Bundestag election averaged between 80 and 85 percent, the US Congressional election did not even manage to attract 40 percent of eligible voters. Thinking that such high voter turnout might just be due to the national election, I was surprised to find out that, 50 percent is considered low for a local election. Upon seeing the voter turnout results for the congressional election, and the later local election (with voter turnout sometimes as low as 20 percent), I was forced to ask myself, what is it that makes Americans more "poll-shy" than their European counterparts?"
- Sarah Allen, a college student from Garner, NC

"The initiative and referendum measures so common in the western states allow the political process to proceed at the wishes of the citizenry. Power is restored to the people and the wishes of the people put forth for vote. It should be made impossible for their votes to _way that we can take power without having millions of dollars at our disposal. All I ask is that if you expect us to take part in your games, that you at least give us a fair voice, and allow us to take the opportunities that we have been promised so many times before."
- Lesley Moak, a high school student from Estes Park, CO

"If online voting is implemented I am convinced that by the next millennium, American citizens will be talking about this ancient phenomenon called they Internet and how it revolutionized American politics."
- Ola J. Friday, a college student in Brooklyn, NY

"In view of the decreased political participation of young adults, it is necessary to take action in order to ensure a continuation of the democratic tradition in the United States. Like most other values, democratic participation is primarily taught in the home, passed on from generation to generation. Once a generation is lost an endless string of future generations can miss the opportunity to serve their part in the political system of the United States. Immediate action is needed to alleviate the problem before it grows into a great rift. Because of the highly independent nature of the American citizen a government effort would me met with distrust. Efforts to forcibly bring voters into the booths would be met with popular and constitutional resistance. The action has to be of the passive aggressive, of the 'build and they will come' type."
- Dan-Victor Giuriutiu, a high school student in Columbia, SC

"If the goal is to increase political participation, the solution seems simple. In Australia, voting is absolutely mandatory. If Australian citizens do not vote, they are fined. This seems like a practical law to uphold. All citizens should be held accountable for what occurs within their country. If they do not vote, who will? The youth are especially responsible since one day, they will be the ones leading the same country and making important decisions."
- Jessica L. Yuen from San Jose, CA

"It may be sad to some people that young people do not think voting is important enough to spend a Saturday morning at the Town Hall, registering to vote, or spend ten dollars Fed-Exing in a ballot that was sent out to late by a careless error. Speaking for myself, as well as many others who feel the same as I do, it is not that we are apathetic, or stupid, or hate politics. I feel very strongly that voting is absolutely necessary for the continued success of democracy. However, voting is just not as accessible to us as it is for the retired people of my town, who can devote themselves to playing games with the government in order to get that little scrap of paper. I just want to walk up to the table, get my ballot, and vote. Or, better yet, take a few minutes out from writing a paper to vote online. If you clear the barriers, more people, and especially young people, will vote."
- Stephanie Simmons, a college student from Kensington, NH

"I was 21 years old, and the thought of voting had completely slipped my mind. If it hadn't been for Mr. Robinson's phone call, I would've gone a year without making a difference, without anybody knowing what my true opinion was. I was quite thankful that Mr. Robinson was passionately involved with politics that he cared to give me a phone call to remind me to voice my opinion. Youth need someone like Mr. Robinson to remind him or her that it is time to cast a ballot."
- Cara Sysun, a college graduate from Narragansett, RI

"Many young people don't make it a point to vote because political issues usually involve taxes, social security, and welfare reform. These issues, however important, do not relate directly to young people today. It is true these issues will have an effect on us in the future, but right now that seems very far away. Candidates for political office also seem to be rich, smooth-talkers whose loyalties lie more with their political parties than the people whom they represent. Jesse Ventura was so popular because he was different, not a "a party" candidate, and talked on the level of the regular, everyday citizen. He reached the masses, not just an elite population who is well educated in politics and debate. It would be nice if everyday citizens had a better chance to run for office, not just the extremely wealthy businessmen, lawyers, and military leaders.
- Melissa M. Flicek, a college student from Wabasha, Minnesota

"Even though the registration process is already fairly simple, it is still not easy enough for some people to find the time to register. Often times, many people forget to register until it is too late, resulting in a decrease of participation. If registration and voting on Election Day over the Internet were allowed, many people who would not normally register or vote would be more likely to do so. Online voting and registration would allow people to be able to both register and vote without leaving their home or office." - Amanda L. Sheran, a college student from Blandford, MA

"Analysts and politicians can make as many changes to the voting system as they want; however, the numbers of young voters will not significantly increase unless the root problem is solved. How can we restore meaning to our culture? Young people will vote without urging when they feel that their lives and their world have a purpose. Until then, leave them alone. Why bring in busloads of people to punch random dots on ballots? Will that improve the content of the suit that interrupts our show? It merely muddies the water and might have devastating impact on the election process. As informed voters, we should rather them not vote at all. If we leave at home the people who have no idea what the candidates stand for, we are left with only the people who appreciate and revere the privilege afforded us by the brave men and women who earned for us the right to vote. People, regardless of their party or political views, are voting because they are hoping to change the world for the better. Until the young people of this country find a reason to vote, do the rest of us a favor, and don't encourage them. To do so cheapens the precious gift of liberty and the lives of those who died for it."
- Julia Hoffman, a college student from Dunedin, FL

"Politicians and campaign managers work nearly exclusively within the tried and true aspects of politics, addressing the same issues time and again. There is a newness to the young voters, however, and an entirely different political agenda that accompanies this newness. The traditional issues are not necessarily at the forefront of young minds, and will not stir them to voice their opinions. Yes, the budget deficit is decreasing, and that is a good thing, but why has Tibet not gained more freedom? Why are alternative fuels, or even alternative lifestyles brushed aside by political tycoons--the majority rule. Often the ideas of youth are brushed aside and rarely offered the protection of representation. We are not the majority, and the reaction to our opinions reflects this."
- Crystal A. Stewart, a high school student from Oroville, CA

"Most youth feel that local, state, and national politicians do not speak to them, and they have good reason to feel that way. Why should a politician waste his time campaigning for votes that will never be cast? My generation, which seems to eschew responsibility for itself, generally allows its parents to shape the political landscape of the country. Great and monumental decisions that will dramatically affect our future are being made without us."
- Brian Varisco, a college student from Peachtree City, GA

"If the youth do not express their ideas and goals that should be accomplished by society, consequentially, the leaders of this country will strive for goals whose are not those of the people."
- Amanda L. Aguirre, from Yuma, Arizona

"Gerrymandering in a very serious problem. This entails redrawing the district boundaries to give a political advantage. The political tactic creates two very harmful problems: 1. it leads to a lack of competition, which then leads to a lack of participation, and 2. this creates safe districts, which also leads to a lack of competition among parties and participants, but also among the voters. If the race for office is not a fair and close race the voters become less involved. I truly feel that this tactic is extremely damaging to the voting decline among the youth and the rest of the United States. The lack of competition and excitement lose the attention of the people. Let's face it, does one vote really matter in a landslide political campaign?"
- Sara Wood, a college student from Glendale, AZ

"The United States is a country of freedom and comfort, so it's natural to examine each possible way the government could conform to the needs of our rapidly changing society. This method has been the primary cause for our advancement, yet this time we may find the solution elsewhere. What could cause a 90% voter turnout without dipping any further into the national deficit? Australia and Belgium have the answer: impose a tax penalty on non-voters. Both have a voter turnout that normally exceeds 95%, due to their participation in this method. Since this approach clearly has tax-like ramifications it may not bode well in the U.S., but our society needs to welcome an idea such as this; however punitive it may seem, it's for our own good."
- Kristin M. Benedetti, a college student in Bakersfield, CA

"Same-day registration would limit the negative consequences of young people changing their state residences because they are entering the professional world, or going to school out of state. Furthermore, same-day registration would allow newly eligible voters to register and cast their ballot in one stroke, subsequently leading more young people to the polls."
- Gabriel Scheck, a college student in Providence, RI

"One of the many reasons that many believe their vote doesn't make a difference is the electoral process. Many people do not understand how the Electoral College works and would rather have something less complex. If popular vote decided the election, more people would vote. They would see the raw numbers, something they can relate to, instead of electoral votes from each state."
- Caria A. Long, a high school student in Bakersfield, CA

"The main cause of voting apathy among this younger population is their obliviousness to the impact issues like federal funding has on them. It is no surprise that without incentive there is a lack of motivation to get to the poles. Nonetheless, is it a lack of motivation, or ignorance and unawareness?"
- Meaghan Askea, a college student from Leesburg, GA

"One place though that you will almost always find a young person is at school. I question why there isn't access to voting places at colleges or even high schools. This is important to me because of the fact that I am so busy. I think that it would be easier for me to vote if I didn't have so far out of the way to go. Sometimes in order to reach a younger person you have to be standing right in front of them so they have to run into you to notice you."
- Rick D. Lorenzen, a high school student from Moorpark, CA

"When people have registered to vote and have understood the whole process of how to vote, the next obstacle that stops many people is what or who to vote for. Unfortunately the details of many issues, bills, or candidates are unknown to the voters. Many voters simply cannot find the time to find out such details and therefore do not vote.... What can the solution for this problem be then? Simple explanations of the candidates, the bills, and the issues can be sent by mail. While not everyone has e-mail yet (electronic voting would not require an e-mail address) and not everyone has an answering machine, almost everyone has an address where conventional mail can be received....Through this simple system the problems of people not knowing who or what to vote for can be avoided and voter turnout, especially among young adults who have yet to discover much of the world's issues, bills and candidates, can be increased."
- Jared Barber, a college student from Billings, MT

"Among the many democracies of the world, the United States stands out as the original experiment in modern democracy. The experiment has succeeded remarkably well without major reform; much of this success can be attributed to a Constitution that has heretofore provided a just and adaptable framework for popular government. However, discrepancies in the American system have arisen. Voter turnout is dropping rapidly as Americans suffer a growing sense of alienation from the political process; this trend is markedly disturbing among young adults, only 32% of whom voted in the 1996 presidential elections. Many analysts and activists have attributed this embarrassing percentage to a political order that seems more responsive to the contributions of wealthy special interests than to the wishes of the average voter, hence the recent push for campaign finance reform. This is only part of the story, however. The United States political scene is becoming increasingly stagnant as incrementalist politicians pursue visions of mediocrity and the mere absence of popular disapproval; the concerns of many facets of society, including young adults, are thereby often neglected. American democracy must evolve with the convictions of the electorate."
- Brian G. Holland, a college student from Lilburn, GA